Today we have to give the reader a visual description without telling them directly. We only had five minutes.
Change:I was happy to something else so I am.
The smile as big as a bird, eyes as big and shimmering as a lake at sunset with everything silent, a happy dance that was worth a gold metal. She was as happy as a monkey swinging through the trees then finding a lot of bananas.
Showing posts with label Quick write. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Quick write. Show all posts
Thursday, August 16, 2018
Tuesday, August 14, 2018
Quick write - week 4. Date: 14.8.18
I only have 5 minutes and we have to make it about a story with a invention and our goal is to start with different sentence starters.
" The cats out of the bag now" whispered Jenny to Lilly on the left side of her. They are always talking about me behind my back. So that is why I have started to make a Change gun. You can shoot anyone you want and then they would change there personality in every way and soon I will not be made fun of anymore because I am crazy. Soon everyone will see my real purpose in life and I won't be know en as crazy molly. Then I saw the class steering at me with a weird look. I looked at Jenny and Lilly. They were laughing quietly. Then my best friend came over to me and told me what everyone knew now. I could not believe what I just heard....... To be continued
" The cats out of the bag now" whispered Jenny to Lilly on the left side of her. They are always talking about me behind my back. So that is why I have started to make a Change gun. You can shoot anyone you want and then they would change there personality in every way and soon I will not be made fun of anymore because I am crazy. Soon everyone will see my real purpose in life and I won't be know en as crazy molly. Then I saw the class steering at me with a weird look. I looked at Jenny and Lilly. They were laughing quietly. Then my best friend came over to me and told me what everyone knew now. I could not believe what I just heard....... To be continued
Monday, August 13, 2018
Quick write - week 3 / 13.8.18
We only had 5 minutes to write this and our sentence starter was " Leave me alone, I'm about to watch lights in the sky!" Pauline bellowed. So I hope you like it.
" Leave me alone, I'm about to watch lights in the sky!" Pauline bellowed to her big brother Sam. As Sam shut Pauline's door she started to look out her window looking at all the stars shining across the sky like diamonds. She stared to think if the world was a figment in her mind and if she was really real. Or if she was a speck of dust on the floor. She thought that If she did not let the world in her life she would not have any problem if she just hind never showed she would be forgotten and she would be free. So she would not have any problems. She looked around her room and shut out all the light and looked at the star wondering what life will be like now having no one. As the night went on she got more tired and started to fall asleep.On her chair still facing the stars.
" Leave me alone, I'm about to watch lights in the sky!" Pauline bellowed to her big brother Sam. As Sam shut Pauline's door she started to look out her window looking at all the stars shining across the sky like diamonds. She stared to think if the world was a figment in her mind and if she was really real. Or if she was a speck of dust on the floor. She thought that If she did not let the world in her life she would not have any problem if she just hind never showed she would be forgotten and she would be free. So she would not have any problems. She looked around her room and shut out all the light and looked at the star wondering what life will be like now having no one. As the night went on she got more tired and started to fall asleep.On her chair still facing the stars.
Thursday, August 9, 2018
Quick write - location story
we only had five minutes.
It was a hot summer day me and my family were at aunts house for the two days her house was a old brick house it never had much light and her house was a very lonely place. It was in a forest far from our house. Her walls felt felt old and hollow. The air in her backyard was dirty and tasted like dust. I could not hear or see any birds. I saw no animals not even Spiders up in the trees. All the plants were dead. I even saw moss growing on he Cat. Here Cat was alive. In the night I could here scratching on the windows and something running outside.
It was a hot summer day me and my family were at aunts house for the two days her house was a old brick house it never had much light and her house was a very lonely place. It was in a forest far from our house. Her walls felt felt old and hollow. The air in her backyard was dirty and tasted like dust. I could not hear or see any birds. I saw no animals not even Spiders up in the trees. All the plants were dead. I even saw moss growing on he Cat. Here Cat was alive. In the night I could here scratching on the windows and something running outside.
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