Today we have to give the reader a visual description without telling them directly. We only had five minutes.
Change:I was happy to something else so I am.
The smile as big as a bird, eyes as big and shimmering as a lake at sunset with everything silent, a happy dance that was worth a gold metal. She was as happy as a monkey swinging through the trees then finding a lot of bananas.
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